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December 8, 2022

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[2022.12.3 考场小作文]

The table below gives the percentage of GDP occupied by health spending in five different countries in 2022.

【2017.7.9旧题翻新】

Task 1:图表类型—table, 考查重点—数值对比，细化至三个方面spending的比较。

Introduction

The table depicts how the health spending of both public and private sectorscontributed toGDP in five different countries in 2022.

[词汇使用——对于核心内容的转述]

Body 1

When it comes to the total spending, two countries, the USA and Germany,draw immediate attention, as particularly large proportions were found, with 40% and 35% respectively. Meanwhile, alimitedamount of total expenditure was observed in the three remainders, beingwithin a narrow range of20% to 30%.

语言点小结：

同位语成分

原因状语从句

伴随状语

词汇：

程度修饰词/短语的使用

Body 2

Regarding the public and private spending, the public spendinghad an advantage overthe private one, with the gap being between 2% and 5%, except in the USA, where the percentage of the former was 3% lower than that of the latter. It is also worth mentioning that the USA and Germany alsotook the leadin terms of the expenses by both the public and individuals.

语言点小结：

独立主格结构

定语从句

主语从句

词汇：

表现‘比较关系’的短语

Conclusion

Overall, the USA isnoteworthyfor its high total spending as well as private spending, while Germany stands out for its high expenditure by the public. Meanwhile, there were no enormous differences found in other four countries.

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